1) Scene-setter Leads
Patients without Border
By Sara Corbett New York Times
Long before the dentists and the doctors got there, before the nurses, the hygienists and X-ray techs came, before anyone had flicked on the portable mammography unit or sterilized the day’s first set of surgical instruments, the people who needed them showed up to wait. It was 3 a.m. at the Wise County Fairgrounds in Virginia — Friday, July 20, 2007 — the start of a rainy Appalachian morning. Outside the gates, people lay in their trucks or in tents pitched along the grassy parking lot, waiting for their chance to have their medical needs treated at no charge — part of an annual three-day “expedition” led by a volunteer medical relief corps called Remote Area Medical.
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/11/18/magazine/18healthcare-t.html?ref=health
2) Direct Address Leads
Lawyer: Woman who got HIV wasn’t told organ donor was risk
By Charles Rex Arbogast USA Today
A woman in her 30s who is one of the four organ transplant patients infected with HIV and hepatitis was not told that the infected donor was high risk, and had previously rejected another donor “because of his lifestyle,” her attorney said.
http://www.usatoday.com/news/health/2007-11-16-hiv-transplant_N.htm
You found a good scene-setting lead, but your second lead is not a “direct address” lead. Take another look at the example on p. 44 in the text.